As promised!
So as promised, I'll post some of the essays I have written, from Primary school to Junior College. The primary ones are fun to read, but the JC ones are abit dry, so bear with me okie?
So here is one I wrote in P4. Still kept the script with me, cause it contains my 'wonderful' memories of pri school.
Here goes....
One day, Little Tom had nothing to do at home, his parents were still working. He was at home all alone and wanted to play. So Little Tom went down to the playground to play. He was very excited because he could play with all the sand.
When he reached the playground, he was feeling very happy. He started to make some sand castles with the sand. Then he also sat on the swing swing. He was very happy. Suddenly, 4 big boys came to the playground also. They saw Little Tom's sandcastle and kicked it. The sandcastle was gone in the end. They also laughed at Little Tom for playing all by himself. They started to make fun of him. Little Tom felt scared and started to cry. Suddenly Little Tom remembered what his mother told him. His mother always told him not to be scared to others. But he must fight back. So Little Tom suddenly became very angry at the big boys because they made fun of him. He went out of the swing swing and stood in front of one of the big boys. Suddenly he picked up some sand and threw it at the big boy's eyes. He could not see anymore. Little Tom then took a stick nearby and smashed the big boy's head. Blood came out. Little Tom continued to smash the head until the big boy did not move. He was dead. Little Tom felt very happy. He went to the next big boy and stick his fingers in the big boy's mouth. Using all his strength, he pulled the tongue out and tied it around his neck until he could not breath. Then Little Tom pulled out the big boy's eyeballs and threw them away. He went to last big boy and kicked his KKB. The big boy cried because it was very pain. Then Little Tom went take a scissors and started to cut him in small pieces. 1 hour later, all the big boys were dead. Little Tom then started to dig the sand and buried the boys in the sand.
After Little Tom finished burying the boys, he went upstairs. His parents were at home. He told his mother what he had done. His mother said he was very brave and strong. Little Tom felt very happy because his mother said he was strong and brave. Little Tom also had fun that day.
So here is one I wrote in P4. Still kept the script with me, cause it contains my 'wonderful' memories of pri school.
Here goes....
One day, Little Tom had nothing to do at home, his parents were still working. He was at home all alone and wanted to play. So Little Tom went down to the playground to play. He was very excited because he could play with all the sand.
When he reached the playground, he was feeling very happy. He started to make some sand castles with the sand. Then he also sat on the swing swing. He was very happy. Suddenly, 4 big boys came to the playground also. They saw Little Tom's sandcastle and kicked it. The sandcastle was gone in the end. They also laughed at Little Tom for playing all by himself. They started to make fun of him. Little Tom felt scared and started to cry. Suddenly Little Tom remembered what his mother told him. His mother always told him not to be scared to others. But he must fight back. So Little Tom suddenly became very angry at the big boys because they made fun of him. He went out of the swing swing and stood in front of one of the big boys. Suddenly he picked up some sand and threw it at the big boy's eyes. He could not see anymore. Little Tom then took a stick nearby and smashed the big boy's head. Blood came out. Little Tom continued to smash the head until the big boy did not move. He was dead. Little Tom felt very happy. He went to the next big boy and stick his fingers in the big boy's mouth. Using all his strength, he pulled the tongue out and tied it around his neck until he could not breath. Then Little Tom pulled out the big boy's eyeballs and threw them away. He went to last big boy and kicked his KKB. The big boy cried because it was very pain. Then Little Tom went take a scissors and started to cut him in small pieces. 1 hour later, all the big boys were dead. Little Tom then started to dig the sand and buried the boys in the sand.
After Little Tom finished burying the boys, he went upstairs. His parents were at home. He told his mother what he had done. His mother said he was very brave and strong. Little Tom felt very happy because his mother said he was strong and brave. Little Tom also had fun that day.
The End
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